Aaroniero tentacle porn is a dime a dozen,but this one goes above and beyond snuffing out a few of the characters, a three part focus on Rukia (because obviously) but this somehow manages to slip in sideways Orihime bashing in the mix, too in the last four paragraphs of chapter 8:
"Orihime," said Aaroniero, "remember how angry you got when we talked about Ichigo being with Rukia? The reason I brought you here with Rukia as to present you with a deal; a deal with a very happy outcome for you." Aaroniero opened another gargunta, "if you walk through this gargunta you'll be back in the human world; you'll be able to be with Ichigo again. However if you decide to do that; Rukia will stay here with me and let's just say her end won't be as happy.
The fear in Rukia also vanished, "I may not have my sword, but I still have kido; that combined with Orihime's powers will be more than enough to defeat you, imposter." Rukia felt a sharp sting on her cheek; her head forcibly turn to the left. She slowly turned back around and looked at Orihime; "Orihime, did you just slap me?"
A twisted grin formed on Orihime's face. "Yes I did you skank," Orihime turned to Aaroniero, "fuck her up good." Orihime quickly walked into the gargunta never looking back.No! Bad tentacle rapefic writer, bad! Take a seat. Take a whole stadium of seats.
Also, this guy's review:
i think you need to find two therapists, one for you and another for the first therapist
Amen, guy. Amen.
*Edited for rules. Sorry 'bout that *bows*